Comments : Break Me...

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Break into my fragile glass heart and look beneath
    the surface.
    '''''''''''''''''''''''''''do you see the love within'''''''''''''''''''''''''

    ''''''or do you see the pieces you just shattered?''''''
    Wow what beautiful and intense lines, so emotional.Loved it. The lines speak volumes of love .

    great write amber

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by amelia

    This is a v different poem to the ones ive read
    lovely
    gave u 5/5 for that
    loved reading it

    thanks for readin my poem
    and for ur words of strength

    love
    amy