Everytime i wake up in the morning i wish i am somewhere else,,,just like the place described in your poem,,,this is great, a world where things are right,,heheh makes one wonder if one can get it huh,,,tc k keep wrtting!

I like this piece, it is quite unique and you created truly great imagery from the beginning to the end. I can deeply relate to it which makes it even more powerful for me. Very effective poem.
keep up!

It's like I'm reading a poem about my self here haha. Sometimes I got the desire to live in another world too, this poem really shows how you can get lost in such a world.

Great done!!

Where have you been, your poetry is simply amazing keep up the great work