I loved the emotions this brought out in me. The repitition was effective in getting your message across. Your language was perfect and fit nicely with the poem. The flow was flawless and I enjoyed this from beginning to end. Well done *5/5*

The flow was nice even though it didn't rhyme much and the emotions stood out well. i got the message of what you were trying to say. 5/5 !props!

Wow. i love the say u didn't really tell what it was about till the last stanza. That was amazing. one problem tho: wuz it sposed to rhyme or not? i didn't know... despite that u still get a 5/5! lol

Gosh you sure have a talent, this poem flowed well and the descriptive words you used gave the poem a deeper meaning. excellent work.

5/5 David

I thought this was a great poem, your word choice was really great. I really liked the flow and the repition. When it rhymed it was good, and the ending was also magnifique, a well deserved 5/5

Stephanie Naylor

This poem is really well worded and excellently written. I really love every stanza of this poem and especially this one:

This love does not come,
From pain and lost passion,
But from the honesty, and truth
That cures it's own disaster.

That's awesome. It must be 5/5

Aww I love this poem the stanza

"""This love does not come,
From pain and lost passion,
But from the honesty, and truth
That cures it's own disaster."" This part has alot of feeling in it i love this part so true..very true...great write!!!!..=)

This is a very deep poem. The flow was beautiful... and the words chosen were great. I didn't like the topic, cutting is stupid... but that doesn't change the fact that the poem was great. 5/5!

YOOO! this is a really great poem... there's nothing more to say to it... another poem about cutting... my bestfrnd can relate to this.. amazing poem! =]

Wow that was some twist. I would've never thought the one more time thing was cutting. In the poem, it seemed more vivid and less obscure then that.

5/5 I liked the vocabulary used in this one :)

WOW, nice emmoction was shown in this poem, A good strong tittle to go with a strong Unity of Poetry. Keep this up! and thanks for r/r/c on my poem!
-Nathan

Wow, really powerful poem.
Especially the last stanza.
But a powerful poem shows a powerful
poet. WEll done hun.
5/5

Very interesting poem, it has a truly intense rhythm and it is written originally.
Good job, few lines are totally amazing and you have nice choice of words, very well done!

Wow...
I truly can't express how much I like this piece. It is original and truly intense, filled with excellently expressed emotions. You created superb atmosphere. The flow of the whole poem is flawless and the imagery very haunting.
The constant repetition of "What's one more time?" is brilliant, so effective. It mirrors addiction fantastically. You have a way with words :)
Truly amazingly done!

The sad thing is EVERY time is going to be the last time. I'm not a woman who believes in addiction - I believe we can all stop when we're ready and ONLY WE can make that decision. However, I'm feeling this piece. My favorite line was "But if what's upon me is mine, What's just one more time?" - I think this is very clever...because this is how it's seen. If it's my problem and my body I can do as I please...Sad! Wonderful write my friend!!!

Perfectly written, captured beautifully. Have a 5

This was phenomenal. You have a lot of talent and so much emotion was written in those lines! You... this just blew me away, so sad, so beautiful.

Wow that was like so great
i may not know wat it like to constantly cut but this poem is grerat

You have a wonderful gift to be able to take a habit or feeling that isn't yours and make it your own. Almost all adults can relate to some kind of addiction at some point in their lives. Sometimes my destructive addictions can feel like an emotional knife.

This is a great poem keep up the good work 5/5