by Rebecca
This poem is amazing. I guess thats all I can say. |
NyC poEm buddy |
by Gizmo
Very emotional |
by Nici
Repitiion was enticing and brought the words to life. Emotion flowed from each word. |
by Rachel
This is a very good poem, many people can relate to this and I enjoyed it. |
It definately hit deep. |
by jessie
I know nothing about cutting but you help to understand the subject in you writing i 've known people with addictions so for you to compare the two things is helpful to people who doesn't know much about "cutting" |
by Shinobi
This poem really throws you into a cutters mind. You never know the exitment of a cutter unless you are one, but here you described it in a very good way. I loved the rhymes and flow, all went together nicely. Great job 5/5 |
Once again, you are very talented! Keep up the the nice work... i love your choice of words in each of your poems. |
by Mr Rhee
Once more you impress me. So much from someone so young. You remind me of myself at that age. My words, then, were also strong. Keep going. |
Deep poem... I'm against cutting though so this didn't appeal to me that much. Loved the side-note, its good to know you don't cut! The flow was great, the word choice was immaculate, and the concept was decent! 5/5 :P |
by Anaisthitos
This poem was one of those that you are sure it's about one thing, but it turns out to be about another. Loved it. I could almost feel it during the last stanza. The words pulled you in, and the whole poem was greatly written. Excellent. Another 5/5! |