by Stephanie Naylor Feb 1, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Your are a beautiful shrine, |
by RobinAnn13
I definately love the last 2 lines. Very powerful. This poem was fairly short and simple but it says so much. I love the storyline. 5/5 |
I'm a little of cynic when it comes to poetry, my earlier work is testement to this slight hypocrisy (as it's rather bad) but this poem has got me erked. |
by Stephanie
I love this. I truly do. The emotions were intense, they blew me away. The word choice was chosen perfectly, and overall, this poem was amazing m'dear. |
by JEFF
I enjoyed it. |
I like the way you use your words. even though they dont rhyme much they still work together to bring out the true melody in your poem. i also like the way you show the fact that the devil cant have her, but he watches from afar. its cute and inspiring love. great read 5/5 !props! |