Hey darl great poem, lot of emotion. great use of words also. keep it up 5/5 xx

Wow, this one is goood tooo. x]
Not one of my top 5, but it's close.
Flawless, I didn't see a mistake, which is AWESOME. x]
And, it had the best flow.
Completely flawless, darling.

Keep it up

Wow so easy for me to relate with this .. I felt as if I was walking that lonely road side by side with you. The way you described what his love meant to you and how it feels not to have it anymore was flawlessly unique.

"You've always been the water to quench my thirst..."
^ahh I just loved that line. It was the perfect description.

Well done *5/5*