This was very sweet. whoever this is about it lucky to have love like this from you.
my only thought is for this line

"Your my other half."
it should be
"You're my other half."
its the correct spelling.
very good
5/5

I love this poem i have a friend that we call each other the half so i can kinda relate to this poem nicely written...5/5!!!...=)

Buetiful,loving,great poem!
5/5

Aww this is really simple and sweet =) I can totally relate to it. Rhyme and flow were great. My favourite lines:

"I love it when you smile,
How cute it is when you laugh,"

5/5

Em xXx