by Juan Feb 2, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
In the soothing breath of thin air, |
by SheenaMarie
Excellent write 5/5 |
by He is the Reason
I really liked how you wrote that. The flow and rhythm was fantastic and the wording was great as well. All in all a wonderful job and I loved the way you expressed how you felt and the emotions, that was the best part. 5/5 |
by JAZMIN
Really good poem!!! |
by kasia nicole
This is a really good poem. i like said in all of them i really injoy reading your work i cant wait until you have more. |
by Fanny
Really good poem i have to say that all your poems are really good you have a lot of talent .loved the poem ,it rymed and made sense and hope it gets better for you . |