Temper

by silvershoes   Feb 2, 2008


I've been told to temper
My temper
That I'm ruthless
Too ruthless
But--
There are some things
Among things
Circumstances
Circumstantial
That disallow me to
Disallow
Examples of idiocy
Exemplified

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  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is an excellent snappy and edgy write. I love the use of "temper my temper".
    I take from this that you don't suffer fools gladly? lol.
    I enjoyed this - a clever and unique piece.
    All the best,
    Ben

  • 16 years ago

    by sibyllene

    I want to know what this poem is about. The title gives a hint, but I'm still not sure. As far as word use and rhythm and emotions go, this is right on. I really am realizing more and more how much I enjoy your writing style : D

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