I want to know what this poem is about. The title gives a hint, but I'm still not sure. As far as word use and rhythm and emotions go, this is right on. I really am realizing more and more how much I enjoy your writing style : D

This is an excellent snappy and edgy write. I love the use of "temper my temper".
I take from this that you don't suffer fools gladly? lol.
I enjoyed this - a clever and unique piece.
All the best,
Ben