I feel for you on your comments on society. I share similar thoughts on living in society. If this world didn't have pretenders, this world would be a much better place.

I'd like to let more out on my thoughts on screwed-up folks in society. But I'll keep this comment clean. But you probably have an idea on how I'd really react to meeting a playa (a pretender as you call em) in society.

You have very good poetry talent.

People in the world can be so cruel at times and the seems as time goes by people just seem to get even more insensitive in the world. But it sucks when you are the target of their attempts to put you down to make themselves feel better. Great poem baby girl. Keep up the good work!

Words form the very lives we live. Far to many times we become all thats ever said about us. Speak "life" over yourself everyday!

K~