I thought that this was amazing!

"I fear this place, in my mind,
But I will not succumb to it's poison,
I will spread this cure,
The new found light"

^^that stanza was the best, in my eyes.
the story told, and how you implied that happiness is the only thing that fills you void, and you used the happiness as "the light"
was superb.

GREAT write
5/5

Hmmm i love the ending of this poem seems very surprising and it means a lot to me! all the stanza's was truly wonderful piece. it really portrayed well and express all the deep words very well. i love those thougths u had really a great imagery.. nice one 5/5

Great poem!! your awsome!!!

Wow I loved this! The final stanza was perfect in every way and it was a wonderful way to end your poem. It left the reader wanting more. I could relate with everything you described which is why I truly enjoyed this piece.

"But I will not succumb to it's poison,
I will spread this cure"
^beautiful!!

Well done *5/5*

Buetufuly written,luved the last stanza!

Good poem, fourth stanza threw me off cause I don't like a tone that you created in it but I enjoyed in this one more than in your other poem.
You made this poem a little too clear for my taste but all in all you have great topic and some lines are truly excellent, you kept my attention in every stanza. Nice work.

Its alright. Some of the stanza are amazing with great flow and rhythm, but others are a bit cliche, like the second line. its like, hmmmm, but not in an in depth kind of way