by EyesOfTheInsane Feb 2, 2008
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
You don't know me |
by Nix
Interesting poem, I think that it could be even better if there is some more powerful wording and unique metaphors but anyway nice piece, you expressed your message on a good way, and rhyming is great too. |
by Mike Martin
I love the fact you put it in a dream...You are a angel, but in this life...you will be someones angel, this I know...good work...5/5...xoxoxo |