The rose I can't have

by ADyingProphet   Feb 2, 2008


My desire for you is like a cryptic veil,

which blossoms when I see your smile- bright as the blessing of Helios's vivid haze.

I am entwined with a twofold fracas.

One, which I am humiliated, in addition, disgusted about
is that my avid heart and reticence can never meet mutually.

How do I look into the eye of a seraph and expect fluid communication?

Concealed words will stay trapped within the tendrils of my tongue.

So I am forced to illustrate you on parchment,

because my pen is not timid of such splendor.

Michelangelo, with the patience of a bear,

hunted the emerald in the forest of his art,

the blood's spontaneous blossom of jade,

rifling a world of light to match your likeness.

Your flaxen hair bears a resemblance of the golden ivy,

that once festooned the barricade of ancient Babylon.

Lighting bolts of cyan opulence sing in the iris of your marble.

The lustrous lipstick on your lips are transparent with maroon Madeira.

Beholding porcelain virtue fragile like the ivory bronco of Italian virginity.

The rapturous perfume of yours exemplifies the smell of heaven's air,

carrying my long and rueful heart deeper to the palisade of desire.

Your complexion is the result of Aphrodite's kiss of magnolia skin.

Being near your presence gives life to me as if honey's sugar was an elixir.

The chisel of time cannot carve wrinkles into you,
for you will stay young in my poem.

Having described you,

I must tell of the other fray I am disputing with elided mine.

I have no supremacy within me to change the flight path of cupid's arrow.

I serve my nights lying awake with a requiem of false hope knowing that,

the halcyon days are already accustomed to cultivating your brilliant petals.

You already have a danseur to frolic with under the iridescent shower of comets.

I have nothing but to call you,

the rose I can't and will never have.

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  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw its great,and you got creative imagination in this poem,so deep feeling behind every word you write,its hurt to feel like that to find your rose and you cant have it,well done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Oh my...
    I am stunned. Your writing skills are flawless and this piece simply left me in awe. Any change will take away from the endless beauty of this poem so I don't have anything to critique here. Your metaphors are remarkable and this is definitely the most beautiful love poem I've read in a while. This piece is complex on some places and simple on the others which made perfect mixture. Your choice of words and the imagery that you portrayed is what impressed me the most. Also, I like the parts related to history and mythology, they added great effect and depth to the whole poem. The ending is amazing, simply heartbreaking conclusion to this poem.
    This piece is definitely going to my favs.
    Keep writing!
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by CatastrophicTragedyXx

    Wow, simply amazing =]
    you have a good vocabulary for sure and every word in the poem has a strong meaning to it that just makes the poem inspring...similar to what edgar alan poe would do ;)

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