Wow, simply amazing =]
you have a good vocabulary for sure and every word in the poem has a strong meaning to it that just makes the poem inspring...similar to what edgar alan poe would do ;)

Oh my...
I am stunned. Your writing skills are flawless and this piece simply left me in awe. Any change will take away from the endless beauty of this poem so I don't have anything to critique here. Your metaphors are remarkable and this is definitely the most beautiful love poem I've read in a while. This piece is complex on some places and simple on the others which made perfect mixture. Your choice of words and the imagery that you portrayed is what impressed me the most. Also, I like the parts related to history and mythology, they added great effect and depth to the whole poem. The ending is amazing, simply heartbreaking conclusion to this poem.
This piece is definitely going to my favs.
Keep writing!
5/5 from me

Waw its great,and you got creative imagination in this poem,so deep feeling behind every word you write,its hurt to feel like that to find your rose and you cant have it,well done 5/5