by Bekka Smekka Feb 2, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
No sleep i can find, |
by Kellie
I like it alot, its sweet |
Nice poem...you use great wordings ! i like that...keep it up ! i give 5/5 ..=) |
by mabona
You sound as though u more of a humble person than anything else, |
by HvN
Very sweet :] Keep it up! |
Very sweet, the rhyme scheme was a good touch, loved the message and emotions behind the piece, loved it keep up the good work. |