True Friend (dedicated to argentina)

by Angel   Feb 2, 2008


Shes like a rose
That tells a story within each pedal
Shes as gentle as a flower
But strong as its roots
Shes ready for what ever comes her way
And put up a fight
She showed me her beauty of friendship
And told me her way of life
I told her ill protect you
And showed her that i cared
She told me i will always be there
And i told her I'll be here for you too
Threw thick and thin
No matter what our life's puts us threw

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  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    It's touching; I can feel your message, especially when you compared her to a rose with a story in each petal. That's truely a powerful image. I also like the contrast you put by saying that she's gentle as a flower but strong like its roots.

    Flow wise, I think it would be better to omit the word she except in the first, seventh, and eleventh lines. Also, I'd suggest to use less of the word her and those extra words and pharses in this piece like too and her way.
    Also for spelling, I think you spelled through wrong if that matters at all.
    It's still a great poem though. 5/5

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