Comments : True Friend (dedicated to argentina)

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    It's touching; I can feel your message, especially when you compared her to a rose with a story in each petal. That's truely a powerful image. I also like the contrast you put by saying that she's gentle as a flower but strong like its roots.

    Flow wise, I think it would be better to omit the word she except in the first, seventh, and eleventh lines. Also, I'd suggest to use less of the word her and those extra words and pharses in this piece like too and her way.
    Also for spelling, I think you spelled through wrong if that matters at all.
    It's still a great poem though. 5/5