I love this one vey good work its like you were telling it to some one whom you miss so much,good work

This is a hotttt poem as well. I like the rythmic rhyming flow. It says it all with out saying too much. Again this one is hot.

A great poem full of emotions. if this is true then whoever you wrote this for is a lucky guy. 5/5

I totally felt it..as am going through these situations and feelings latley :D..the poem was sooo sweet and simple..loved it

keep writng :)

Awww! thats just the sweetest thing ever! I feel lyk i can relate to it! You captured it in a gr8 way! 5/5!