This poem is amazing
i can connect with it so much
all your work is amazing
and i love it
keep up the great work!
<3

Good job. It's really nice. I love it.

Nice flow. really heart felt & sooo deep

So sad but i can really relate right now.....i really love it jess i can feel how emotional it is its like i can hear it crying.....5/5

laura

Right now, I feel the same. I feel like I could have writen this myself.

"What you've become is the price you paid to get what you used to want."

^I just think you can maybe relate to the quote. Great poem hun. Keep holding on..somehow you're gonna make it through this.
Good luck and I'm here to talk to if you need me.
--Viola

Nicely Penned.
I thought it flowed well, and had an aura of sadness surounding it.
The length was good, and it expressed itself well.

Keep it up,
5/5 Elly

This is actually a very good piece of writing
i really could feel your emotion
and i understand how you feel
i was exactly liek that about ayear ago now...its really hard i know
but time will go n and soon things will be better
and when you finally find that missing part to your life...its a great feeling

keep striving to be who YOU want to be
and only who YOU want to be
and dont listen to the peope who try to tell you to be somthing else

cause the people who mind dont matter
and the people who matter wont mind

I can't really say that i relate. but i can tell it was deep and emtional. good job! 5/5

Amazing job on this one. It was emotional, the flow was flawless, and it was very easy for me to relate to. I love this line, "I have nothing of who I was, and I hate who I've become". Beautifully written, m'dear. Overall: 5.5 (:

-- Steph.

Hey really nice. I really liekd it
keep up the really greak work!
5/5
<3tay

Great job expressing how it feels to be trapped that way! I can't say that I've experienced this, but you've done a good job of showing me how it feels to others who have. Excellent piece.

Wow I can clearly see the emotions here. You did a great job. I know how it feels and it gives in insight on how you felt.
5/5 keep up the good work

Nothing matters and nothing ever will,
I'm tired of living up to your expectations
And living with your limitations.

*I liked this. I would maybe change the second line to "I'm tired of trying to live up to youe expectations". Other than that. I thought you did a nice job. I like the tone you use here.*

I've destroyed who I am to satisfy a careless Trent
I have nothing of who I was, and I hate who I've become
I cant even remember what if feels like to actually be happy

*I liked this staza the most. I can really relate to what you are saying. Such a sad poem :( *

I'm lost in a world of hate, sorrow, and hopelessness.
The hate of myself,
the sorrow of my past
and the hopelessness of never being happy.

*Wow...love this part. I love how you break down each part and explain it's importance and how each has affected you. Clever*

i can't escape

*This single last line, is so heartbreaking. It makes things seem so final. Like there is no coming back from the pain. Nice work hun. Keep it up. Nik*