Reality check

by Angel   Feb 2, 2008


I'm a figment of your imagination
And you're the bum in the street just thinking about me.
nigga you are harmless
and that reality baby
i was your reality
and now look at you,
you're sitting at home thinking about the words that was spoken out of me,
that came from the heart.
yea, i was slick,
slick enough to forget about you
and just moved on.
I'm a accept it
you can call me all you want
just remember who played who first..

i wrote this for my friend, a response for her ex. i thought it would be nice to share it with all of you.
please comment and tell me what you thing.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    The beginnng line held my attention. He once was my reality and my world, but now the times have changed and now he's a figment of my imagination. Funny how we pretend and front, but in conclusion, they still are our reality. That was a good line. We all do and say things to hurt people, but in the end, we hurt more becaues we hurt them, well I know I hurt more.

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    I don't usually go for slang poems because they don't usually hold my interest; but this one was different. With a few changes I believe that this poem would be very popular. I don't really know much about slang, but isn't it possible to write it without using single letters and numbers for whole words? If so I would suggest you edit it because to me that takes away from the meaning of the poem. But as I said I don't know much about slang. I think the concept was good, but it could use a little more imagery. The flow was also kind of awkward, but they could be because I'm not familiar with slang. Overall I think you did a good job and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

    Letty

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