by Alexandra Jade Brewer Feb 2, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I swore your love would last forever |
by HidinVictim
Now this is very beautiful, and so sad, the flow is wonderful, and the title is great... the story you've told with this piece is one so many have had to go through, yet knowing this does not make it any easier. I really love this one... 5/5 |
by PygmyPuff
Its a great start. I loe the topic and the structure. The repetition in the first stanza is kinda distracting as it isnt consistent throughout the poem. |