Drinking Time

I like it, short and simple, it gets across what you want, you can really feel the sadness... while i like this piece, you have some that are more powerful so i'll give it a 4/5

Wow, this one was really good too. I've turned to drinking a few times myself, so i can really relate

This poem is simple and sad, well written and great emotion great write...5/5

Eh, its alright. The rhyme scheme makes it seem kinda young, but at the same time its kinda funny, so it almost works.