Eh, its alright. The rhyme scheme makes it seem kinda young, but at the same time its kinda funny, so it almost works.

This poem is simple and sad, well written and great emotion great write...5/5

Wow, this one was really good too. I've turned to drinking a few times myself, so i can really relate

I like it, short and simple, it gets across what you want, you can really feel the sadness... while i like this piece, you have some that are more powerful so i'll give it a 4/5