I love it...its amazing and i kno how u feel im dealing with the same thing.

I love this a lot! This was amazing. It was worded so well. Trust me, when it comes to free verse poetry, it takes a lot to impress me, but you did it!!!! This was sooo good!
*ME*

I love the last line "Oh, won't you dance with me?" it is a perfect summary to an amazing poem.

I agree with G the last line blew me away, I don't know anyone who could have phrased it better, The flow was great and I loved the emotions behind this peace, keep it up =)

Splendid poem so passiontae

well done