Dreams of Reality

by Alexandra Jade Brewer   Feb 2, 2008


In the distance, a familiar face
The sun shines at his back
A smile spreads, I begin to race
Down a snow covered track

I've waited to long for this
Wanting to be in your arms
Needing your touch, your kiss
Capturing all your charms

I enjoy every minute in your presence
This is one hell of a dream
The moment becomes intense
The passion makes us scream

I refuse to pinch this all away
This can only be the start
You're here now, and here you'll stay
We can't be pulled apart

Tangle ourselves, with no release
Our hands begin to roam
This moment will not cease
Together our hearts reach home

The night can't near an end
I'm afraid to wake to soon
I only want for the hours to extend
To your touch I'll never be immune

I soon begin to realize that this dream
Has progressed from possibility to actuality
Realization makes me happily beam
This dreams no dream but reality

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  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    AWWW this is so sweet, i love it, the emotion is amazing... and the flow great as well...

    I enjoy every minute in your presence
    This is one hell of a dream
    The moment becomes intense
    The passion makes us scream

    I LOVE THESE LINES... this right here truly set the poem in my opinion, very well written GREAT JOB... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Morgan

    Wonderful and expressive of the feeling love brings

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautiful! I just loved the ending because I love it when wonderful dreams become a beautiful reality. Nicely said. I do thing the flow was a bit rocky in the beginning but as the poem progressed, it became flawless. The emotions and images you described were ones I could relate with which made it even more enjoyable to read.

    "I enjoy every minute in your presence
    This is one hell of a dream
    The moment becomes intense
    The passion makes us scream "
    ^beautiful!!!

    well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I LOVED THIS!

    the "I refuse to pinch this all away"
    that was so breathtaking.
    i understand it came from the whole "pinch me im dreaming thing"
    and i thought you putting this line into it, was absolutely awesome.
    very creative.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lets Keep it A Surprise

    Favorite.

    You are a remarkable writer, and the flow of the words and vivid images just spills off the paper! The emotion is beautiful :)

    brilliant 10/5

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