Wishing to kill

by falln angel with broken wings   Feb 2, 2008


Wishing to kill,
You have turned my life around.
Thanks to you these chains I am bound.
The body of me no one has found.
Lying here wishing I could defeat you.
What am I to do?
You hate me, you have killed me
Inside and out.
What I have to say you doubt.
Now I’m out of your life.
Be careful of the knife.

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  • 16 years ago

    by MC MiraKEL

    Love it so scary but not in that way in a [whoa] way...

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    The flow of this one is really good. I love it. Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow really good poem it had such strong emotion definite 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Lance

    Wow i like this poem alot espesialythe line about chains:)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    Wow, once again amazeing "Thanks to you theses chains im bound" that was great ^^ I could't of thought of something like that even if i tried o.0

    :Holds up card once again:

    5/5

    woot woot!