by RobinAnn13 Feb 3, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Bend my mind |
I like the form of this poem a lot along with great rhyme scheme from the beginning to the end. You managed to create interesting and excellent flow in every stanza. The emotions are expressed in a good way. |
by StandStill
Wow. really really amazing |
I found that quite captivating, the simple structur of it and the lexical superiority you show, is a good way of getting through power an emotion, I loved it |