I found that quite captivating, the simple structur of it and the lexical superiority you show, is a good way of getting through power an emotion, I loved it

Wow. really really amazing

I like the form of this poem a lot along with great rhyme scheme from the beginning to the end. You managed to create interesting and excellent flow in every stanza. The emotions are expressed in a good way.
The ending lines are very effective- truly fantastic conclusion for the whole poem.