Death come quick

by peaunt   Feb 3, 2008


Death comes quicker than u think.it takes love one and more.so u should stay colse to the ones u love.beacsue when they died u do not want ur last words to be I HATE U .

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  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    The message in this poem is clear, but it needs work. There are spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors. Never use a letter for a word. What I mean by that is never write the letter U instead of the word you; it's annoying to me and turns off my interest. This poem could also use some formatting. I suggest you edit, and then resubmit it. I will be more than happy to reread it and comment again. : )

    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason

    The message in this poem is nice and the best part of it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    So true...Hate is a powerful word....xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissy0590

    So true!

  • 17 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    I get the message to this piece.
    nice. :] an interesting write.

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