by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost Feb 3, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I miss you so much |
by RobinAnn13
I liked the general storyline of this poem. You have some good word use. The last line fit perfectly. One issue, though, that i've noticed is it doesn't flow well. such as in the first stanza. The last 2 lines have too many syllables/words to fit or work well with the first 2. |