Wicked

by 1Mistake   Feb 3, 2008


I am the pain you feel inside,
I am the darkness you try to hide.

I'll eat at your soul,
You'll have no control.

I am the voice in your head,
I am the one you most dread.

I mess with your mind without a care,
I will make you feel weak with despair.

You try to fight what you really fear,
I will corrupt your soul, my dear.

When those thoughts had finally disappeared,
I came back with what you feared.

Your sanity will cease,
There is no sweet release.

I am the wicked who uses hate,
I am now the controller of your fate.

((I have an odd thing with rhyming lately... >.>...))

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    I loved this poem, it was so well written and although the flow isn't what counts in a poem, its the intention and feelings behind each word i think that you did a great job, it was such an easy read that was just perfect!!! i loved your descriptions. keep up the great work!!! you have a lot of talent

  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda

    This is awesome! it's how I feel. (and plus the title is of my favorite musical ever WICKED!) lol, it really shows your rhyming skills.

  • 16 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Strangely, this poem made me think of the musical too...i think it could fit well.

  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda

    That's a pretty sweet poem! I liked all the rhyming it tied together pretty well. I also like the title Wicked...it kind of reminds of my favorite musical...lol. Anyway, nice poem.