Powerful from the first to the last line, very deep and original. I like the flow of the whole piece and the topic is excellent.
My favorite stanza is:
- Dream a dream,
Laugh a laugh,
Scream a scream,
Overlook the aftermath,-
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So unique, truly amazing.
Whole poem is greatly written. I like the message of the piece, you truly portrayed it on a good way.
The ending stanza is fantastic conclusion for the whole poem, truly effective.
Keep up!