They Will See Our Love

by Beautiful Forever   Feb 3, 2008


"Theres no such thing as a soul mate",
Thats what they said, laughing at me,
But I could sense, on the first date,
The feelings that no one else could see,

They were all wrong...

I wanted show them, how we really feel,
Force them to believe, that we are real,
Expose our love, to everyone we know,
Allowing them watch our love grow,

Our love is so strong...

Laying in bed, bodies intertwined,
Holding each other, becoming united,
No sad thought, could enter our mind,
The fire in our hearts, quickly ignited,

Our hearts scream out for more...

They watch us walk by, holding hands,
Attending events, making out in the stands,
Without a thought, or a care,
Everyone stopped, and now they stare,

So this is what a heart is for...

Warming our bodies, beating so fast,
Back in bed, under the covers,
We know in our hearts, this will last,
Kissing each other, as passionate lovers.

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I love you Amira... See what happens when I miss you?

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  • 16 years ago

    by ForsakenBeautyXx

    Dont listen to them...a poem you write can NEVER have flaws...because it comes from what YOU feel<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is a beautiful poem! I am soooo jealous of this Amira girl! lol. I want a guy to write me poetry like I write for him! Ahh, oh well. Anyway, back to the poem. I absolutely loved it. You are a very talented writer, and I love everything I have read by you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This poem is really good. i love this poem as well.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a great poem but it has some flaws in it because of the constant change in the story - well maybe it's just me. Nonetheless it was still a fine written piece.

    5/5 from me :)