Goodbye

by Beautiful Forever   Feb 3, 2008


Goodbye...

You weren't true from the start,
Never faithful, you broke my heart,
But I won't sit around and cry,
Instead I'll just say, "Goodbye",

So long...

I believed you at first,
Until my insides began to burst,
In your heart, you knew it was wrong,
To lead me on, for so long,

Nice try...

Crying, begging me to come back,
You think I would? After that attack?,
I know you think I'm just a guy,
But sweetie, "Nice try",

I'm gone...

Theres no reason for me to stay,
Nothing left to say,
Just forget the name "Sean",
And face the facts, I'm gone.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Christy Trenholm Schmall

    Well done In life AND poetry!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    I loved the sarcastic tone you used in this poem. It allowed the me to see the resentment you have toward whoever this is you are speaking to. Great poem, and the rhythm was right on key.

  • 16 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Nicely put. i love it again!

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Again u r so good i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Rob Matt

    I love the rhythm, how like the off beat has a sarcastic tone and the main part has a good flowing simple rhyme scheme with a good topic and flow.