by Beautiful Forever Feb 3, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Goodbye... |
Well done In life AND poetry! |
by Jenni
I loved the sarcastic tone you used in this poem. It allowed the me to see the resentment you have toward whoever this is you are speaking to. Great poem, and the rhythm was right on key. |
by Good Enough
Nicely put. i love it again! |
by noha
Again u r so good i love it |
by Rob Matt
I love the rhythm, how like the off beat has a sarcastic tone and the main part has a good flowing simple rhyme scheme with a good topic and flow. |