Wow what a very nice style piece of poet! i love this 2 lines it was really true and hope guys could relate it...

But I won't sit around and cry,
Instead I'll just say, "Goodbye",

just a one lesson to me, that no matter how they broke my heart or how many times i've got hurt

I won't sit around and cry,
Instead I'll just say, "Goodbye

very strong and inspriring...

well,, all the stanza's was truly amazing and it has a deep and great msg...

fabulous work 5/5

I love the rhythm, how like the off beat has a sarcastic tone and the main part has a good flowing simple rhyme scheme with a good topic and flow.

Again u r so good i love it

Nicely put. i love it again!

I loved the sarcastic tone you used in this poem. It allowed the me to see the resentment you have toward whoever this is you are speaking to. Great poem, and the rhythm was right on key.

Well done In life AND poetry!