Comments : OUR WORLD

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    But will never forget the peaceful world
    Which we made for each other!

    my favourites lines... that says alot of words.. its a short poem but behind this there is alot of pain.. that u hide.. express your self openly.. and it will work.. great job my friend. take care 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Love this poem!! the words are so great and your way of expressing your love and bond is amazing!! great job!! :P

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Amazing poem. i wish we could always live in that peaceful world that is made for us....

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow, it was so touching and i really was deeply into these stanzas and i do know how you feel.nice poem