SAD PART OF YOUR LIFE!

by Noo track to walk   Feb 3, 2008


I wish I would be yours forever
But I m still happy
That I got some place in your heart
I wish to help u
What ever makes u happy and
Try to remove all the sadness from your life
My happiness is always that
That u would always be happy
But if some where in your life
Any moment that makes u sad
Remember me and some happiness will arrive
If I would have
Now I have no wishes left
But the last wish is that no sad moment
Touches or comes into your life
Nor any moments in which u miss me
Because I am the sad part of your life.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoveTear

    For sure it's my favorite ! Thanks :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    I wasn't sure if you were trying to rhyme in this poem or not so thats a little vague. Great poem though i did feel it and enjoyed reading it!! :):)
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Noo track to walk

    Hay thanks for correcting...it is very silly mistake which i did..thankss

    but can u tell me that how can i change it ? i mean how can i correct this line ?

    thanks once again !

  • 16 years ago

    by Whitney

    Aww this is really nice, and it has a good portrayal of emotion. The only thing i found was in the first line... You said "me" when i think you ment "be" if i am wrong i apologize. :) Really good write tho!! 5/5 from me, as u truly deserve it! :)
    ~*Whit*~

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    This is caled true love feelings. i guess that u know what is real love. and only a real person can understand real love. so nice of you to write this piece. its excellent. realy deep and touchy... i am sure you can do well in the future..

    my prays are wiht you..

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