This is caled true love feelings. i guess that u know what is real love. and only a real person can understand real love. so nice of you to write this piece. its excellent. realy deep and touchy... i am sure you can do well in the future..

my prays are wiht you..

Aww this is really nice, and it has a good portrayal of emotion. The only thing i found was in the first line... You said "me" when i think you ment "be" if i am wrong i apologize. :) Really good write tho!! 5/5 from me, as u truly deserve it! :)
~*Whit*~

Hay thanks for correcting...it is very silly mistake which i did..thankss

but can u tell me that how can i change it ? i mean how can i correct this line ?

thanks once again !

I wasn't sure if you were trying to rhyme in this poem or not so thats a little vague. Great poem though i did feel it and enjoyed reading it!! :):)
xx

For sure it's my favorite ! Thanks :)