Talk about needing work..............

Mary...this is nice but it needs some work...sorry but that's the way i see it...still luv ya...Mike...xoxo

I think its pretty awesome actually. Yeah it needs some work, but i get the main idea and its pretty true. I see how trusting others is a good thing, if you don't you could both lose in the end.

You have a great idea to work with here. I really wish you would fix it up a bit. This can be your rough draft. :)