by Crystal Gaze Feb 3, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Cry To The Moon. |
by noha
Beautiful i realy enjoy reading, it such words draw color pic ,great jop 5/5 |
by Miranda
Evy this is simply amazing!The imagery was breathtaking and you always chose the right words for whatever you were describing.You held the reader's attention without making it choppy.You are amazing at writing these stories/poems. Just beautiful.Can't wait to read the other ones. |
This piece was simply amazing. a short story in a poem formatt. very unique. :] the imagery and description was stupiendeous and amazing and the emotion was captured quite nicely. i was definitely allured from beginning to end. 5/5. :] |
That was amazing. I love reading anyways so I really enjoyed this. I read a lot of fantasy stuff so this actually reminded me of some werewolf books I've read even though I think it was about actual wolves. It never got boring or where I wanted to quit reading, it held my attention really well. I think you're a very talented writer! You have a natrual way of coming up with just the right words to use. Great job on this short story! |
by Blissful
The dark and haunting imagery in the first stanza just captured me and I was eager to read more. The poem progressed flawlessly with no bump in the flow was is hard to do with a long poem/short story ... I give you props lol. Overall I enjoyed this .. you have great talent. Well done *5/5* |