Whats wierd is you have short story
and I thought of this more as a poem haha
here i just gave this big speel on your other poem
about how i thought it was a short story
and ughh haha
well this was really good
you have talent for the dark and mysterious
poems/storys
have you ever thought about lyrics?
i think youd succeed in those as well
because I write lyrics and you have that sort of edge
5/5
kaila

The dark and haunting imagery in the first stanza just captured me and I was eager to read more. The poem progressed flawlessly with no bump in the flow was is hard to do with a long poem/short story ... I give you props lol. Overall I enjoyed this .. you have great talent. Well done *5/5*

That was amazing. I love reading anyways so I really enjoyed this. I read a lot of fantasy stuff so this actually reminded me of some werewolf books I've read even though I think it was about actual wolves. It never got boring or where I wanted to quit reading, it held my attention really well. I think you're a very talented writer! You have a natrual way of coming up with just the right words to use. Great job on this short story!

Cayce xx

This piece was simply amazing. a short story in a poem formatt. very unique. :] the imagery and description was stupiendeous and amazing and the emotion was captured quite nicely. i was definitely allured from beginning to end. 5/5. :]

Evy this is simply amazing!The imagery was breathtaking and you always chose the right words for whatever you were describing.You held the reader's attention without making it choppy.You are amazing at writing these stories/poems. Just beautiful.Can't wait to read the other ones.
Keep writing,
Rado

Beautiful i realy enjoy reading, it such words draw color pic ,great jop 5/5