Beautiful Silence

by Alexandra Jade Brewer   Feb 4, 2008


Cold concrete stained bright red
Bruised and pushed against the floor
Hatred pours from screaming lips
Begging, pleading "Please no more"

Pain resonates through her head
Trying to forget each morbid word
Your hate filled sentences take control
She's believing all the convictions that she heard

A trigger sounds, the noise is deafening
Her demonic laughter rings through the air
She watches blood pour from his heart
Full of all evil she was forced to bare

Slowly steadily she falls to her knees
What has she done, shes tries to breathe
She had hoped this beautiful silence
Could make all the pain forever leave

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    WOW. Morbid and sad all at the same time. Very nice combination. Your writing in this poem seems very simple, in a good way, and I found it very enjoyable to read. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh my gosh this is just well amazing you are so talented and wow this is so cool i loved it im going to vote for it for a contest okay lovely job

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Wow amazing really well written poem.
    The words were powerful and story was
    clear to comprehend. Well done.
    Keep up the awesome work.
    5/5
    <3Tay

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRapture03

    Wow, that was really good. Very emotional, very deep. Idk if it was a true story, but i sounds like it would've been very tramatic.

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow.
    You truly did an excellent job on this one. Your word choice was flawless, it truly blew me away while I was reading. The title was perfectly selected, and the emotions really hit the reader's heart. The flow was flawless, and overall, you did an amazing job, m'dear. Overall: 5.5

    -- Steph. <3

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