Very deep and filled with emotion, loved the flow and overall feeling of this, great write keep it up.

Wow. This poem is, well, amazing.
The feeling i got, from the first line, especially. wow. way to draw someone in!
The girl in this, if i am correct, shot the other person?
i visualized a girl shooting someone, and especially "She steadily falls to her knees" part. i could see this happening in a movie!
in slow motion.
5/5

This poem is amazing! The choosing of words was excellent. The rhymes fitted the meaning of this poem and the struecture and flow were solid. You had such emotions expressed through some of the rhymes, not to forget the strong ending. Really liked it 5/5

Absolutely stunning.
I wish I could offer more than a 5

Wow.
You truly did an excellent job on this one. Your word choice was flawless, it truly blew me away while I was reading. The title was perfectly selected, and the emotions really hit the reader's heart. The flow was flawless, and overall, you did an amazing job, m'dear. Overall: 5.5

-- Steph. <3

Wow, that was really good. Very emotional, very deep. Idk if it was a true story, but i sounds like it would've been very tramatic.

Wow amazing really well written poem.
The words were powerful and story was
clear to comprehend. Well done.
Keep up the awesome work.
5/5
<3Tay

Oh my gosh this is just well amazing you are so talented and wow this is so cool i loved it im going to vote for it for a contest okay lovely job

WOW. Morbid and sad all at the same time. Very nice combination. Your writing in this poem seems very simple, in a good way, and I found it very enjoyable to read. 5/5