WOWWWWWWWWW in a word AMAZING

AMAZING just as CY GINDLE said. Now this one is by far the best poem I've read all day. Great job in the vocab and flow.
"Without it now I'm left desolate, empty, feigning, and doomed. Just like a spider that weaves in it's prey. I weaved myself in while he was there, unknowingly in front of his face. "
^^fav stanza =}
EVERYTHING about this one was perfect and the way that you kept it real without playing it safe with the words is fantastic!
PERFECT 5/5

xxPaSsIoNaTe kIsSeSxx

I like it...lets just leave it at that cuz i like it in to many ways and just the thought of haveing to write so much right now made me feel lazy......good work =)