I just made a poem with this title just then, lol. well this was way better than mine, and the wording was fabulous. excellent.

5/5 David

Haha. thanks so much. it's a good title..

Its really good!!
keep up de good work!!

cheers

Great poem hunni!

5/5 keep up the great work

n thnx for commentin mine=]

x o x o

The first stanza stood out the most to me it really seems to get the point across and is clear on what the poem is about
its a great poem
keep up the good work