Teardrops on my Guitar

by NyellMoonlight   Feb 4, 2008


Deceive me with intricate deceptions
absorbed directly from your lips
moisten with lies, with sweet fantasies
that burn down thoughts in the mind.

Sheets colored with crimson hues
enwrap around strangling guitar strings
that whisper softly chords of tinted song
mirroring teary soul's particles.

Sadness drips from scarred fingertips
murmuring captivating promises,
seducing senses, seducing intellect
morphing hesitation into painful pleasure.

Gentle voice caresses puzzled feelings,
inhaling, as I close my eyes,
scents of this night, assorting fallacies;
Teardrops ornament silhouette of a melody.

Deceive me with intricate deceptions
absorbed directly from your lips
moisten with lies, with sweet fantasies
that burn down thoughts in the mind.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Sheets colored with crimson hues
    enwrap around strangling guitar strings
    that whisper softly chords of tinted song
    mirroring teary soul's particles

    This is my favorite stanza.
    You painted a very sad yet meaningful picture for us readers!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Yes I do agree with the people who have posted comments on your poem.

    You have brilliant skills in writing poetry.
    "bravo"!!! @--,-'-- I lay a rose apon a master piece. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cooper

    Oh, how beautifully you can make words flow together ... a deep and gentle stream of poetry.
    This simply captivated my mind and soul, and your nearly flawless, and thought-provoking words emanate emotions and imagery.
    Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The first thing that pooped out to me was the flawless use of language. Very effective. It really drew in my attention from the beginning and I was eager to read more. The title was appealing and captured my attention. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Your poems is really rare.. you hav a different way of expressing yourself by the way you write your poems and the use of words... obviously this is another tremendously good poem! =]