by NyellMoonlight Feb 4, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Deceive me with intricate deceptions |
by Ingrid
Sheets colored with crimson hues |
by JEFF
Yes I do agree with the people who have posted comments on your poem. |
by Cooper
Oh, how beautifully you can make words flow together ... a deep and gentle stream of poetry. |
by Blissful
The first thing that pooped out to me was the flawless use of language. Very effective. It really drew in my attention from the beginning and I was eager to read more. The title was appealing and captured my attention. Well done *5/5* |
by jLegendc
Your poems is really rare.. you hav a different way of expressing yourself by the way you write your poems and the use of words... obviously this is another tremendously good poem! =] |