Wow, incredible piece, it is somehow absolutely mind-blowing and you again intertwined great beauty and sadness and created this masterpiece.
I enjoyed in every line and I absolutely admire your choice of words, you kept my attention with that fantastic rhythm.
Well done!

Wow, that was really good. You used alot of strong words, and it painted a really good visual. Idk why, but it reminded me of "While My Gutiar Gently Weeps" by The Beatles. Good job 5/5

Gentle voice caresses puzzled feelings,
inhaling, as I close my eyes,
scents of this night, assorting fallacies;
Teardrops ornament silhouette of a melody.

fav lines,
lol you stole the title from taylor swift! Im telling! Just kidding. anyhow great poem. I play guitar but i always seem to write about my piano instead. great piece :) keep it up

Your ability to piece words together is simply astonishing, you are probably one of the best writers i have read for a while.

" Teardrops ornament silhouette of a melody"
^^^gave me chills.

5/5

Wow wonderful job with this! You have such a way with words, this poem is so beautiful, yet so sad and heart-breaking at the same time. You did a great job on this! the flow was right on too by the way :] keep up the great work!

Your poems is really rare.. you hav a different way of expressing yourself by the way you write your poems and the use of words... obviously this is another tremendously good poem! =]

The first thing that pooped out to me was the flawless use of language. Very effective. It really drew in my attention from the beginning and I was eager to read more. The title was appealing and captured my attention. Well done *5/5*

Oh, how beautifully you can make words flow together ... a deep and gentle stream of poetry.
This simply captivated my mind and soul, and your nearly flawless, and thought-provoking words emanate emotions and imagery.
Well done.

Yes I do agree with the people who have posted comments on your poem.

You have brilliant skills in writing poetry.
"bravo"!!! @--,-'-- I lay a rose apon a master piece. 5/5

Sheets colored with crimson hues
enwrap around strangling guitar strings
that whisper softly chords of tinted song
mirroring teary soul's particles

This is my favorite stanza.
You painted a very sad yet meaningful picture for us readers!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid