Nice job i love it

"..slink back into"
-Maybe its just me, but slink doesn't seem like a very firmilar term to me. You may want to change that, I can infer what you mean here.. but just in case.

I like this poem a lot... It had a okay flow to it, and I liked how you described this man in the beginning trying to draw attention to himself, but in the end he didn't find anyone. Great write. 5/5.

Good poem, although sad. u did a good job explaining how it feels, i would know... haha

*sick with love's
cold starvation. *
i guess a lot of people likes this part. Because its such a strong image. Starvation, comes from hunger, a need, without you can't survive. Associating it to love, was just brillante

Hey this is a really sad poem, it kinda makes you feel really sorry for the guy even though you dont even know him nice work and very nicely done 5/5