Lost

by xoOrdinaryGirlox   Feb 4, 2008


She cant eat, she cant sleep
She cant think, shes in so deep
Baby you occupy her mind
With your words so kind

Shes becoming lost in your game
She always thought it was a bit lame
Now shes caught by you
But she can’t fight through

Every minute, every hour
You have that special power
No matter how hard she tries
You draw her in with your eyes

To her this game is unknown
In the deep end she got thrown
Shes become quite scared
But you seemed like you really cared

To end her confusion about this game
You gave it a very simple name
She took a step side ways
Started walking but looked back and said ..Okay..

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  • 16 years ago

    by lisabrighteyes

    Very good!
    I really like it!!
    5/5
    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Awesome poem! Way to go on this one. I loved the emotion. You have real talent, dont ever waste that!

    -xx-

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Very emotional. I love it:)